Here's a scene:
FADE IN
A man is sitting on a rock in the desert. He’s an attractive man, but the type of man who doesn’t rely on his good looks to get ahead in life. A second man approaches.
Man 1:
Man 2:
Man 1:
Man 2:
Man 1:
Man 2:
Man 1:
Man 2:
Man 1:
FADE OUT
16 comments:
oscar material all the way
I totally see an Oscar in your future, totally.
I think it's a bit too long.
qop - maybe something along the lines of this:" "
awa - sweet!
pyx - I had been dreaming that script up for years. Maybe I can write a sequel when the inspiration strikes.
mel - totally awesome!
min - I might be able to cut a little out of the middle, but I hate to sacrafice my art for the sake of the time restraints.
I didn't like the fifith line. I felt he was almost being borderline racist. Maybe you should re-think that one...
however, the rest was BRILLIANT!!!!
I don't get it....
No, wait...now I do.
Yeah, funny.
Gay cowboys?
You should make the entirety of the blocking their eyes shifting.
I laughed. I cried. I touched myself a little.
I like it.
Can I do the score? I've been brainstorming and, keep in my mind, I'm just throwing things out here, but how about something along the lines of
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What do you think?
Can I do the score? I've been brainstorming and, keep in my mind, I'm just throwing things out here, but how about something along the lines of
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What do you think?
Woops!
Ohhh, a SILENT film. I thought I 'd gone deaf there for a minute
Brilliant! I'd come back to see it again and again! Well worth the money!
You are fucking hell-arious.
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