Friday, January 28, 2005

True Romance

With Valentine's Day coming up, I'm working on a poem for my girlfriend. If you've ever seen 10 Thing I Hate About You, this is the style I've chosen to write the poem in (except changing the "hate" to "love"). It may need some fine tuning, but I think it's pretty good so far.

I love it when you look at me that way,
I love it that you don’t think I’m gay.
I love it that you don’t care if I’m a loner,
I love it how when I look at you I get a boner.
I love it when you go fishing and catch me bass,
Don’t you just love to look at my ass?
I love it when you cook me a delicious dinner,
I love it that you’re not a loser, you’re a winner.
I love it when you shovel the snow instead of me,
I love it that this poem is over, cause I gotta go pee.

12 comments:

The Pink Kitty said...

hehehe, "i caught you a delicious bass!" heheheh... I think I'm starting to like that movie too much

Good poem though.

nique said...

i really don't have much to say about this enchanting declaration of love for your certainly lucky woman except, bravo! bravo!

Burfica said...

I acctually like that poem. I also think you should show her your Lucky Charms for valentines. hehehehehee

Ali said...

Tim-
Touching, sweet, and funny at the same time. What a master of words...;P

PK-
I thought the exact same thing as soon as I saw "bass." We've got problems.

Michel Johansen said...

That pee line slayed me Tim!

Inari said...

that poem was amazing
you should take her stargazing
on valentine's day
because otherwise she might start to think you're gay

does that make me a better poet than you?

Alekx said...

closing eyes
You said ass
How many times to I have to tell you I'm a sweet innocent little catholic girl and I can't see words like that.
Wanna play in the lucky charms

Jenny said...

I thought for sure the line after the bass one would say "I love that you let me ... something... ass"

The Pink Kitty said...

Ali, Yeah, maybe we do but still, we've got skills cos I can draw you a liger! ;)

Tim said...

everyone, your replies were all funny, but I'm too lazy to think of something funny in reply, so thanks.

But I will reply to Jenny... woah... i wish!

Ali said...

PK-

You may be able to draw a liger, but did it take you 5 hours to do the shading on the upper lip?

(Tim-sorry for hijacking your comments section)

The Pink Kitty said...

Yeah it did. ;)

Funny, I'm watching it right now becuase I woke up too early and I can't go back to sleep